feedback on draft design



Feedback 




In my production group we gave each other feedback on our album sketch , When my production group gave me feedback we realised that our draft digipacks had a lot in common- for example we all put the band at the front and only put the portrait of their faces and essembled there faces in an unusual way, we also had a very similar colour theme for example two of us went for a black and white theme . when i was going through my draft with my production group they had clearly said that i have resembled the "star image" design that i hoped to get across to my audience  - here are some of the feedback notes they gave me. 



  • Maybe change the picture of the models since they are not the main focus 
  • have only one picture as a max with the models since they are only in the music video and we are trying to market the band not the models 
  • not sure about the ivy plant as the spine - doesn't have as much of a correlation with our band theme 
  • love the black and white theme 
  • like the front cover with the band and the male facing at the front and the males to the side as a (side profile) 
  • like the back with the models and the lead in the middle 
  • not sure about the guitarist on the inside left cover since he is not the main focus 
  • instead of having the models on the back maybe have a logo that represents the band 
  • love the way it is structured and layed out 

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