music video idea feedback

Comments that were made:

•  good ideas and very unique something that has never been done before 
• there needs to be more of a performance element (3rd element to the music video) and im not really showing the artist , unless thats something iv done on purpose but then i would need to be clear how if that was a conscious decsion. fine a way of incorperating the artist.
•  introduce a third element for all ideas 
• really cool uniques ideas 
• think about were would you stage it were would you light it 
• would you do a mixture of cultures 
• the lift idea is good but have to bear in mind you can film inside a lift or outside a lift not both because inside a lift you can build in the studio than outside we have to go to outside location for that 
• great song of Trndsttr but maybe you could combine the two ideas of walking down the catwalk and the lift since it would bring a third element, and they are too very easy sets to build 
• the lift idea and the catwalk one work well but its one set so need more too it 
• have to think about what is the artist going to be doing 
• for the rap one - we don't have the biggest community of black ethnic in the school so will be hard casting 
• really thought through good ideas