feedback for thriller

Feedback for thriller idea 1

(Lost)

Feedback for first idea(lost thriller):

It wasn’t clear when the opening sequence starts because I told the whole story so they audience became confused. The idea needs more tension created in the opening sequence. It could potentially be too long for a opening sequence, but if I focus on either the girl or the guy then more tension would be created and it would be shortened down. The opening scene should be nonlinear.  It sticks with conventions but if I condense it down then it will be a lot easier to see the genre which is thriller. They like it a lot its very (Taken) inspired style , but there Are two different levels as a producer its great but at a teacher it terrifies Mike because how do we film something like that with it being appropriate and using students or using a teacher because it does need to be horrific and replicate how terrible this is and replicate how tension can be created but there is only so far you can push it since we are still students. At the end of the opening scene the girl running away won’t be realistic because in a situation like that if a girl is being kidnapped and these people are abusing the females which isn’t the first time there doing this it’s a gang and unfortunately human trafficking gangs exists so it would be about putting and locking up the girls straight away so it would be impossible for her to escape. However having the opening scene of seeing the girl look at all these different rooms of prostitutes would be creative, and a good opening scene just have to think about how you would possibly film it.